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Horse Topaz 2007-03-07 . chapter 1
great job i really like it!, i really relate
D i v i n i t a t e 2007-03-07 . chapter 1
Very nice. Good job,though the line "How can I return the time had past?" Made me a little confused with the grammar useage.
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