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someone you know 9/21/09 . chapter 1 The words - nice. Quite you, malli, quite you. I can't take back the words forget creating worlds (there is only one) They are not for me (I couldn't catch the jewels when they came, flying glimmering at me) yet I cannot stop thinking what would happen if... they were mine. They are though, in my dreams: in an unreal world of fuzzy and foo made by me, for us two, where I'll always remember you. And I wish you'd talk more with your sense of humour and sharp eyes of die kleine maus. reply soon, guess-who |
Cimantha 3/7/07 . chapter 1You punctuation, and capitalization were a bit distracting, the the poem itself was wonderful :) |