|Reviews for poems to an unknown|
| someone you know 9/21/09 . chapter 1
The words - nice.
Quite you, malli, quite you.
I can't take back the words
forget creating worlds (there is only one)
They are not for me
(I couldn't catch the jewels when they came,
flying glimmering at me)
yet I cannot stop thinking what would happen if...
they were mine.
They are though, in my dreams:
in an unreal world of fuzzy and foo
made by me, for us two,
where I'll always remember you.
And I wish you'd talk more
with your sense of humour
and sharp eyes of
die kleine maus.
| Cimantha 3/7/07 . chapter 1
You punctuation, and capitalization were a bit distracting, the the poem itself was wonderful :)