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| Esette's Lovely Eyes 2008-07-04 ch 17, | abuseI loved this story... though I don't always like sci fi. There is just one thing... have you heard of the TV show Dark Angel? This story has the same feel as it, but with many differences that you would know if you have heard of the show... Anyways... great story! |
| HiringParanoia 2008-07-03 ch 11, | abuseOkay, so I realize that I'll probably find out when I actually finish reading this, but just in case, I have to know: Why are they all so frickin' protective of Jazz?! Not knowing is really putting my mind into a frenzy. Why her? The gas, the firing squad, why are they always trying to keep Jazz safe? |
| Sara 2008-07-02 ch 17, anon. | abuseI forgot to mention my favorite quote from this story! I actually had many favorites, but this one comes to mind immediately: My poor, beleaguered knight in shining armor. His damsel in distress can’t seem to get her character straight. Oh, well. He’ll get over it. |
| Sara 2008-07-02 ch 17, anon. | abuseWell i'm really sad to hear about your need to remove the story from this site, but it's something i'm all too familiar with and totally understand. I'm just so glad that I got to read it before you took it away! This is a really fascinating piece of writing. I simply love all of the dry humor and the voice that leaks through your text. Fantastic character development! I do hope that it gets published, and best of luck to you in all of your other writing as well as with other problems that you are encountering. You've done a fabulous job with this story. Props to you. I wish so much that I could read the final chapters of this story, but I guess I'll have to wait for it to come out in print, shall I? Congratulations, and cheers! |
| Sara 2008-07-01 ch 11, anon. | abuseHello, haven't even finished reading this chapter yet, but just wanted to commend you on your writing and your ability to keep the reader's interest (ok, mine, lol). It's now two in the morning and I've been reading since midnight. Props to you! The way you referred to their having sex as the 'horizontal boogie' was simply epic. I could not stop laughing! |
| XxAmanda Is A Jasper's Girl... 2008-06-24 ch 17, | abuseBoy am I glad that I finished reading this before you took it down. It was a wonderful story, and I cannot wait to read the rest of it, and the sequal, when they get published. I am honestly anxious for it to come out because I want to read what happens to Jason and Jazz, and all of the others. Once again this is a wonderful story, and I am definitely going to be one of the 'fans' that buys the book(s). I wish you luck in getting it published. --AMS |
| redtwilight 2008-06-17 ch 14, anon. | abuseoh my gosh. i am so sorry. i can't say that i can relate, but i know what it's like to have someone close to you hurt and in pain, even if its not you. i just want you to know that i am thinking of you, even though i don't know you. good luck and i wish you a long and happy life! keep writing! |
| babygal4real 2008-06-13 ch 4, | abuselol nyc chapter :-) |
| Mini May 2008-06-11 ch 17, | abuseim not going to lie to you, i'm extremely saddened. but i understand. you cant trust people out there these days. and this story is far too good to get stolen from you. I've been with this since the beginning, and i will be here with it until the very end, which is you getting it published. Which i wish you the very best of luck in doing! May you succeed in all your dreams that you have as an author!! |
| Mini May 2008-06-11 ch 16, | abuseim glad you got your muse back!! i've missed this story. and this chapter def. wasnt a disappointment! :]] nice work. |
| Lady Katreina 2008-06-11 ch 17, anon. | abuseThis is WONDERFUL! I can hardly WAIT to read your novel! It's going to be AMAZING! Thank you so much for thinking of publishing In the Name of Science. (However In the Name of Prejudice's summery sounds similar to the Maximum Ride series. Similarities not-with-standing Pah-LEze find a good publisher? Eh?) You are going to be amazing, awesome, and all-talented. If you're not already. n...v Thank you 16x over and over! |
| Lady Katreina 2008-06-11 ch 16, anon. | abuseNo! Not responsibility! I hiss and cringe at the very word! Thank you for updating. I love this story so very much. Good luck with the boyfriend and your lost muse. The loss of the muse is a great loss indeed. |
| caracol 2008-03-27 ch 4, | abuseI found your story today and I found it really grabbed me. I want to tell you that you've done a great job, and I particularly like a few of your lines. For example: “You have to keep up. Because I’m not willing to watch those bastards rape you one more time. And I’m not willing to watch another dick go inside you, unless it’s mine. Understand?” I really like it because it was ballsy to write it, and from the writing point of view it's very complex, it can be interpreted in different ways and it really shows the depth of the character and allows for character development. I really hope that you update this, I'd like to see it to its end. Good work! |
| August L. 2008-01-10 ch 15, anon. | abuseI love this book! I think it's wonderful! Keep up the good work Tashi! If this book was in a book store I would so buy it! I hope things go better for you and that you finsh In The Name Of Science soon. Good luck, and happy writing! ~ August L. |
| Kim S. 2007-11-17 ch 15, anon. | abuseTashi, Loved that chapter can't wait for the next one! Call me soon ok! Kim |