Good use of suspense!
I cant wait to read the next one!
The story still lacks depth and character development, but its still early in the story. I shouldn't be the one to comment on grammar, but I notice all of you dialogue is squished together. Most books I read have it separated by line breaks.
Good luck on your next chapter!

Krustyknuckles

Its not a good thing to confuse your readers. I have no idea where this third character is coming from, but it seems to be the guy having the "IM session" in the previous chapters. I have to stress again the importance of description.

Krustyknuckles

VERY GOOD! The only constructive crit I've got for you is that your chapters are too short. I'm not really learning about the characters, and spending a paragraph or two on describing the environment isn't a waste of time. I'm still thoroughly enjoying it though.

Krustyknuckles

Its keeping my attention. So far, so good.
I wouldn't ever have thought to write about graverobbers. Its an interesting story.

Krustyknuckles