wow... this kinda sounds like an ex of mine. Tho I didn't play her she kinda played me but she got played by 4 other guys before me. really sad. Very emotional and good.

I really like your format. It's cool as. This is a really pretty poem, although sad and heartbreaking. Simply beautiful.

Hey yeah I usually try to comment but I read yours at school and didn't have time to comment :(
anyway I love your poem alot I especially like the boy I can totally relate to this piece love it
keep up the great writing