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| spiderfly 2008-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseYou have some good ideas here, but it's not a particularly deep piece. However, it doesn't pretend to be. I like the formatting, with the words in bold and the word 'lost' being spaced out and making the rest of the poem seem to be in verses. The final rhyming of 'alone' and 'headphone' is very poignant. There is something here that every reader can relate to. Well done! |
| Faith Adeline 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI do this all the time. Just lock yourself in your room and blare the music. I loved it, great job :) Faith |
| Moon-Chaser 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI love this, it's so very true, music or writing can just make you so lost. I like the way that you structured this and the different fonts that you used, really adds to it. Keep it up. |
| life like whoa 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseMusic is the best way to lose yourself. You can tune out everything around you and just surround yourself with sound that numbs it. Makes everything not matter for the 2 or 3 minutes the song plays. I can relate so well to this. I'm sure many others can as well. I hope to read more from you soon. Keep writing! |
| a silenced revolution 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI know that feeling. Great work! ~Hazellin PS Thanks for reviewing! |
| Left On The Shelf 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Nice format. |
| doxology 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abusei just love this. I can totally relate. Peace and Love ~> Lifted |