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| Ebony Waters 2008-05-29 ch 1,   | This is a great story. Far from cliche, yet so meaningful. I especially enjoyed the ending. A cliffhangeryet it states so clearly what's going to happen... Wow. |
| Otseis Ragnarok 2007-03-13 ch 1, | Nice 180 degree flip. Not at all what I expected. As for my questions: Is Chris going to kill, rape or do both to Danielle? Did he do the same to Lauren? Will we find out next chapter? Either way, I LOVE this story. For a rating, I give this a SEVEN out of SEVEN. |
| Jaide Nox 2007-03-11 ch 1, | Oh very, very well done... definately got my heart pumping faster and I can't wait for more! |
| divinexglory 2007-03-09 ch 1, | Ahh! Cliffhanger! Oh-no! ...I'm a babysitter..now I don't wanna babysit anymore.. Lol. JK, but real good! |
| Soulie- 2007-03-09 ch 1, | Ah! Scary daddy! -Hide- |
| Silence of the Shadows 2007-03-09 ch 1, | o my gosh...scawe...lol XD |
| balloonsmiles 2007-03-07 ch 1, | I'm a babysitter! EK! Very good story. |