aww, that sweet.
love the last line.
its great,
keep writing,
liz

Wow, wonderful work. Its kind of twisted and pretty at the same time. Kind of like a Salvador Dali or Van Gogh painting. There's something off about them, but everyone still loves them. [not meaning something is wrong with your poem, off directed at the falling-up snowflakes.]

--t-t-t-ouch.

I LOVE this metaphor.. its unique and well done

snow in russia
must be cruel and beautiful

This has amazing imagery! I can see every piece playing out in my head, as if it were a vivid dream.

-R. Louise