just out of curiousity, this was great by the way, have you ever considered writing a longer story? becuase i think you would be able to write something, being as you have brilliant ideas and the story right below this (can't remember what it was called) would make an awesome read if you were to expand it in to chapters. just a thought...thought i'd share it. but like i said, though, this was great at the length it is but you could definitely expand a lot of your stuff if you so chose or had the time. time is a **...that's why i hate having to spew out chapter after chapter because there never seems to be enough time for long stories. bah!