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| lifesjustbegun 2008-06-02 ch 1, | Tomorrow's Message, Nice message, beautiful. ~Liz |
| Jess Angel 2007-05-26 ch 1, | Lovely. Beautiful theme. One I can relate a bit too. Again, you have wonderful flow that's a treat to read. The rhyming works, and while I also wasn't big on the mar/far/are, there was a purpose to it. It didn't detract from the overall piece. Nice work. As always, keep writing! Jess 0:o) |
| sin olvido 2007-03-07 ch 1, | I wasn't much a fan of the 'far, are, mar, scar' rhyming, but other than that, a genuinely uplifting poem. Good job. |