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Reviews For: Never Too Far

lifesjustbegun
2008-06-02
ch 1,
Tomorrow's Message,
Nice message, beautiful.
~Liz
Jess Angel
2007-05-26
ch 1,
Lovely. Beautiful theme. One I can relate a bit too. Again, you have wonderful flow that's a treat to read. The rhyming works, and while I also wasn't big on the mar/far/are, there was a purpose to it. It didn't detract from the overall piece. Nice work. As always, keep writing!

Jess 0:o)
sin olvido
2007-03-07
ch 1,
I wasn't much a fan of the 'far, are, mar, scar' rhyming, but other than that, a genuinely uplifting poem. Good job.
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