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| Actuated Starla 2007-03-08 ch 1,   | Wow, This is really great! I love the: ""The record broke The minute I saw you And the cords in the phone Wrap themself around my throat"" And the ending. They flow so beautifully and are really touching. |
| DOORphrame 2007-03-08 ch 1, | Amazing poem. I loved the repitition, it made the poem flow wonderfully. Some of the rhyming seemed a bit forced though. Wonderful job. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-03-08 ch 1, | This flows almost like a song, with the rhymes here and there and the way the sentences flow... It's really good. Even though the beginning sort of creeped me out, I loved the ending because it was dramatic and intriguing. Great job. |