Excellent poem! I could almost see myself in the ocean. Though, that may be due to the fact I just returned from a month in Hawaii...

Keep the poems coming!

You're really getting quite good at descriptions.

Prettinesses...that was really good! Sorry I haven't reviewed any of your stuff in so long, but I really have been reading it! I love the ocean, as I now suspect you do (although I've never asked you about that before. Hm...). Now I have to go find my ocean pics again. One thing that bothered me, though, was that, in the first stanza, 'it's' should be 'its'. Oh well, call me picky. Keep writing forever! ~Empress C