Just got caught up.
&& it's so good.
I really missed reading this.
that last chapter [the end of it] was really hard to read.
but the first part of it was good!! lol.
Can't wait to read more. [=

It has been a long time since I have read any of your work. You are blooming into quite the writer, as I knew you would. Very modest about your talents. Somebody used the term cliche, but I would disagree. Cliche would imply we already know the twists and outcome of the story, but you do not always take the direction it seems we are being set up for.
Be different! Write from your heart! Write for yourself!

PS.
I enjoyed the comment on Journalism ... :P

THEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER!

That last bit made me sad. :(

She needs to run away with him, she'll be protected from her idiot husband, and they both will have someone who loves them.

Hurry up and update! :D

Its so good!

AH!

I LOVE this story!

I'll be honest, I didn't think I was going to like it much, but I did. It grabbed me from the beginning, I love that you started most of it with the little girl's perspective. It tore at my heart reading what she's gone through.

It written beautifully, very good use of detail description and all that. *sucks at reviews*

I can't wait to read more. Haha, knowing who you've 'casted' to play the main characters, I can't wait for Naomi and Johnathan to get together, she needs better.

...OMG! I just saw that there are more chps! How could I have missed them?! *is an idiot*

*goes to read* :)

I really like this one. I know how hard it is to write about little girls/familial abuse (I've got a piece from the POV of a six year old girl as well!) and you've really captured Abby's heart. I'd love to keep reading.

Your story is cliché, but alright. A tip: Proofread, and never say 'I suck at summaries' in your summary. Especially not with chatspeak; it makes people have assumptions of your story that aren't compelling them to read it (I, personally, thought that your writing would be ditsy and without captials and stuff. It wasn't, but that's the impression I got.)

Cheers,

Me. ((Darkening Mist))