WHAT

WHAT

D:<

WHY HAVEN'T YOU MENTIONED THIS TO ME BEFORE. IT HAD A MEGANE CHARACTER. YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE MEGANE CHARACTERS. ** IN GLASSES. C'MON.

Oh, and your writing style is surprisingly good. You gotta post more chapters.

this one is good ^.^ but if you don't continue I will be forced to kill you ;P I would like to see where this goes, so update soon please if you're going to >.>


~Yazumi skulls

great start! usually I don't like when stories just jump into things but you pulled it off nicely ^^. there were a few run-ons that could be fixed but over all the chapter was good.

I like the plot line, too. it reminds me a bit of the anime/manga: gravitation. anyway... keep up the good work!