This is beautifully done. Love the imagery too. Got to go for now. Will read more later. :)

This is a great poem in regards to the imagery, the references to Isis and Osiris, and the style. The style... egads, it speaks so much in its simplicity, like the speaker somehow regrets all this.

Though you may want to add stanzas and punctuation somewhere. This was a bit hard to read as it is, but I'm a hypocrite so ignore me. XD

Great job!

~Cristina :)