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Reviews For: The Faceless Deep

AluminumMuse
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. I like the way it is written, although it is perhaps a bit slow. Very interesting concept. Thumbs up!
Hikari no Roojii
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was great! Did you really write that in just an hour?

You really got the guys emotions across well and I only spotted one mistake ("full of life fro the surface to the endless abyss).

Overall, very well written and very interesting. ^__^
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