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| AluminumMuse 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I like the way it is written, although it is perhaps a bit slow. Very interesting concept. Thumbs up! |
| Hikari no Roojii 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was great! Did you really write that in just an hour? You really got the guys emotions across well and I only spotted one mistake ("full of life fro the surface to the endless abyss). Overall, very well written and very interesting. ^__^ |