| Reviews for Love Redifined |
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Kalista Jia 4/13/09 . chapter 1WOW: Love the ending part: and this day Love will be redEfined" Pretty lovely poem. havent fallen in love with anyone yet for the time being so I have no idea how it feels. Nice poem. |
Firetrap 2/16/08 . chapter 1Yo. Yer poem was NB. ;] You should bulk 'em up a bit though. I always write a huge, essay of a poem. :L Also; Virgo is not a fire sign, it's Earth. So STFU. |
Noihseret 3/10/07 . chapter 1nice poem! the only mistake I noticed was "Feeling you will touch me life" should 'me' be 'my'? besides that, the poem felt a bit repeditive but overall it was good. I really liked the last few lines. "love will be redifined". hope you keep writing. |
beatrice is hot 3/8/07 . chapter 1R-E-D-E-F-I-N-E-D |