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| Life In Heaven 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseYo. Yer poem was NB. ;] You should bulk 'em up a bit though. I always write a huge, essay of a poem. :L Also; Virgo is not a fire sign, it's Earth. So STFU. |
| Noihseret 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abusenice poem! the only mistake I noticed was "Feeling you will touch me life" should 'me' be 'my'? besides that, the poem felt a bit repeditive but overall it was good. I really liked the last few lines. "love will be redifined". hope you keep writing. |
| beatrice is hot 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseR-E-D-E-F-I-N-E-D |