WOW: Love the ending part:

and this day

Love will be redEfined"

Pretty lovely poem. havent fallen in love with anyone yet for the time being so I have no idea how it feels.

Nice poem.

Yo. Yer poem was NB. ;] You should bulk 'em up a bit though. I always write a huge, essay of a poem. :L

Also; Virgo is not a fire sign, it's Earth. So STFU.

nice poem! the only mistake I noticed was "Feeling you will touch me life" should 'me' be 'my'? besides that, the poem felt a bit repeditive but overall it was good. I really liked the last few lines. "love will be redifined". hope you keep writing.

R-E-D-E-F-I-N-E-D