|Reviews for Love Redifined|
| Kalista Jia 4/13/09 . chapter 1
WOW: Love the ending part:
and this day
Love will be redEfined"
Pretty lovely poem. havent fallen in love with anyone yet for the time being so I have no idea how it feels.
| Firetrap 2/16/08 . chapter 1
Yo. Yer poem was NB. ;] You should bulk 'em up a bit though. I always write a huge, essay of a poem. :L
Also; Virgo is not a fire sign, it's Earth. So STFU.
| Noihseret 3/10/07 . chapter 1
nice poem! the only mistake I noticed was "Feeling you will touch me life" should 'me' be 'my'? besides that, the poem felt a bit repeditive but overall it was good. I really liked the last few lines. "love will be redifined". hope you keep writing.
| beatrice is hot 3/8/07 . chapter 1