I think a mass of butterflies just exploded in my stomach =]

Just FYI: I think you meant 'confidante' when talking about Jess being a friend to talk to. And the other word is 'spiel' instead of 'speal'.

CUTE!

xx

Well I loved this.
But I do want to know your take on what happenens.
Great job
X

Oh my goodness I LOVED this! Sure, it was obvious that larry LOVED Steph and that Charlie and Katie would end up together, but still. It was super cute..I especially like how Steph did the right thing. It was very nice of her.

Great job!

Aw.
I love the fact it was JUST a one shot and the whole storyline wasn't taken too seriously, if you get my meaning. xD
Good job!

Wait why wasn't the ending cute? I kinda thought it was...haha Well...if she rejected him, that would be sad. It was definitely very open. Then again...the story in general was a little sad.

-Katherine

Such a great way to end this! I was rooting for Larry all the way through :-)

I would say that this was cute, except that I've been in a similar situation, and the feeling is not "cute" at all. Really. Except I actually went with this guy to the dance, but then his friend (whose name is actually Katie) showed up and he spent about two hours talking to her and ignoring me. *sniffle*
But seriously, this was really well written. And ok, I actually did see the ending coming, but that didn't make it any less perfect.

-plugs ears-

THEY GOT TOGETHER AND I'M NOT HEARING OTHERWISE.


Ah, well, screw closure anyway.

This was really, really good.
I loved the ending, it was so unexpected!
GREAT job!

Aw, so sweet, absolutly amazing. I love your writing style. love&peace

Totally loved the ending. Not only was it a twist to an infamously popular cliche, it really was the icing of the whole story. Other than the occasional few spelling mistakes, I thought you advanced the characters' development quite nicely and the story moved really well. You gave Steph such a strong voice that even I could feel some of the little pangs when she had to kind of 'sacrifice' Charlie for that Katie girl.

But, I totally love Larry. He's like the little sidekick who gets the girl of his dreams in the end. xD

Curse your unbelievably wonderful writing skills! (I'm just kidding; it's just that I should be studying right now, but instead I can't take my eyes off the computer screen because your stories are so tremendously amazing.) This was different from your other stories (well, from the ones I read so far, that is), because you left it at kind of a cliffhanger. It was a creative approach. Keep writing! =)

^_^

Haha, this leading char is definitely different to your other ones -nod- More serious and stuffs, but I don't mean in a bad way.

No, no.

It was nice =) And I like the name Charlie.

hey, I just the ending! Very creative!
Great story! like all yours!
just wondering if u ever considered writing a sequel. I think that would be great!