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DSLuverGurl123 2008-08-18 ch 1,	abuseWait why wasn't the ending cute? I kinda thought it was...haha Well...if she rejected him, that would be sad. It was definitely very open. Then again...the story in general was a little sad. -Katherine
Random Acts of Authorship 2008-07-21 ch 1,	abuseSuch a great way to end this! I was rooting for Larry all the way through :-)
WithoutException 2008-07-14 ch 1,	abuseI would say that this was cute, except that I've been in a similar situation, and the feeling is not "cute" at all. Really. Except I actually went with this guy to the dance, but then his friend (whose name is actually Katie) showed up and he spent about two hours talking to her and ignoring me. sniffle But seriously, this was really well written. And ok, I actually did see the ending coming, but that didn't make it any less perfect.
The Cat Died Nobly 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuse-plugs ears- THEY GOT TOGETHER AND I'M NOT HEARING OTHERWISE. Ah, well, screw closure anyway.
starlit x sky 2008-06-17 ch 1,	abuseThis was really, really good. I loved the ending, it was so unexpected! GREAT job!
Evolet Blue 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseAw, so sweet, absolutly amazing. I love your writing style. love&peace
auburnfusion 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseTotally loved the ending. Not only was it a twist to an infamously popular cliche, it really was the icing of the whole story. Other than the occasional few spelling mistakes, I thought you advanced the characters' development quite nicely and the story moved really well. You gave Steph such a strong voice that even I could feel some of the little pangs when she had to kind of 'sacrifice' Charlie for that Katie girl. But, I totally love Larry. He's like the little sidekick who gets the girl of his dreams in the end. xD
Incurable Dreamer 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseCurse your unbelievably wonderful writing skills! (I'm just kidding; it's just that I should be studying right now, but instead I can't take my eyes off the computer screen because your stories are so tremendously amazing.) This was different from your other stories (well, from the ones I read so far, that is), because you left it at kind of a cliffhanger. It was a creative approach. Keep writing! =)
Cheezieball 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuse^_^ Haha, this leading char is definitely different to your other ones -nod- More serious and stuffs, but I don't mean in a bad way. No, no. It was nice =) And I like the name Charlie.
XxXweirdoXxX 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abusehey, I just the ending! Very creative! Great story! like all yours! just wondering if u ever considered writing a sequel. I think that would be great!
Elizabeth07 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseThis story was very entertaining. And, I yelled at the end, "Oh, no!," I could not believe the story ended this way. And, I had no idea that Larry loved Stephanie, that caught me by surprise. I was mad that the story had no resolution, I hate cliffhangers, but, love this story so much! Please give it an ending, or do a sequel. I must know what happens next, pretty please, with sugar on top?
x3life 2007-12-09 ch 1,	abuseno i wanna know what happends next.. haha =) but its a great one-shott!! but on the saddish side too... and they both seem like such great guyss... haha
dallascity 2007-11-23 ch 1,	abuseAh, this was too... well... CUTE! I hate using that word, but in this case, cute is all I can think of! I kind of got turned off to Larry in the beginning about his big bushy eyebrows, but awe! He is so (I'm going to use another cliche word here) ADORABLE. Awe:)
Ever Since That Day 2007-10-16 ch 1,	abuseI wanted.. just one more chapter. Some finality! But, and here I sigh, you're the author and I still love the characters and the way it's set up. Your characters have a great sense of humor (I probably only think that because it reminds me of my own). Loved it!
xxxNitz 2007-10-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw. That was such a cute little story. Made me smile!:D Keep up the good work! x

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