Once again you amaze me. Beautiful!

Best Wishes!

TSP

Two technical things: punctuation, this really feels like it needs it. If you're very antipunctuation then you're going to need to use your line breaks a little more wisely. Also capitalisation, I know that it's an old tradition in poetry to capitalise the first word of each line but I would recommend against doing it here as it just doesn't seem to mesh.

In regards to the language, it's not bad but the repetition grates after a little while. The wording is also very simplistic and I'd recommend trying to shake it up a little bit. The gypsy queen idea is interesting but the way you've executed this is rather cliched. Different verbs and adjectives would really help phrases like "songs of a time long ago" and "whisper a prayer", "sinner's heart" which just don't work here.

Also on line three I believe it should be "Atop"?

I think a tight edit would really bring this idea to life.

.:midnight:.