self loathing...sounds familiar! -

i like the first half of it...fave lines:

"these lies I tell to comfort my sorrows

spoken with twisted tongue and broken jaw"

espcially the last line...the only word that comes to mind is beautiful and morbid art. dunno why tho. but i lub it!

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I like this poem. you truely capture the feelings. I also like your word choice. :D good job