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| Carmel March 2008-06-21 ch 4,  | abuseEven though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work! ~Carm~ |
| RKRBirdgirl 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseKeep yup rewriting this story! The first one was very good, but so it the rewriting, just please dont leave a lot out. Its an awesome story! I wonder what happens next in their story! |
| pinkeclipse 2008-05-13 ch 4, | abuseare they going to spend time together soon? |
| naokoangel01 2008-05-11 ch 4, | abusewell this revised one is funny and I am interested to know what will de different in this one |
| quite x contrary 2008-05-11 ch 4, | abusei LOVE this story :D please please please keep writing!! |
| naokoangel01 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is great Keep up the good work :) |
| Jevanminx 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseOh Tobias got a little bit annoyed there didnt he, hahahaha. JM |
| Midnight Dove 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusehey, that was really good. i just finnished reading the first version too. please update soon! |
| Kyhaara 2008-04-02 ch 3, | abusePlease write more :) I love it! |
| Lizzy 2008-03-22 ch 3, anon. | abusei luv this story so far i cant wait for sum more chapters!! can u give me sum sugestions for sum stories,please? |
| K.D. 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abuseThis story is Ah-mazing!! Please Update SOON! |
| too light for gravity 2008-03-20 ch 3, | abusethank lord you updated i was gonna go crazy x] i must've reread the first story nth times now :D |
| atreyu love 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abusegonna read the revised version now :) |
| Bellaria 2008-02-15 ch 3, | abusewhoo an update *grins* i really like this how you've changed it and haven't completely, if you get what i mean. sorry about your loss, any loss is hard. i'll be waiting for your next update, whenever it comes up |
| quite x contrary 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abuseThis version is wayy better, i like the original but the story is just more interesting in this version and i feel like we get more insight into the characters minds, which is awesome. keep it up! |