Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!

~Carm~

Keep yup rewriting this story! The first one was very good, but so it the rewriting, just please dont leave a lot out. Its an awesome story! I wonder what happens next in their story!

are they going to spend time together soon?

well this revised one is funny and I am interested to know what will de different in this one

i LOVE this story :D please please please keep writing!!

This is great
Keep up the good work :)

Oh Tobias got a little bit annoyed there didnt he, hahahaha.
JM

hey, that was really good. i just finnished reading the first version too. please update soon!

Please write more :) I love it!

i luv this story so far i cant wait for sum more chapters!!




can u give me sum sugestions for sum stories,please?

This story is Ah-mazing!! Please Update SOON!

thank lord you updated
i was gonna go crazy
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i must've reread the first story nth times now
:D

gonna read the revised version now :)

whoo an update *grins* i really like this how you've changed it and haven't completely, if you get what i mean. sorry about your loss, any loss is hard. i'll be waiting for your next update, whenever it comes up

This version is wayy better, i like the original but the story is just more interesting in this version and i feel like we get more insight into the characters minds, which is awesome. keep it up!