AHAHAHHAHA! Gawd. That's funny.
I do hope you win/have won. Etc.

*stupid giggle* i've read this so many times. it kicks ass. wish it could have been longer. that would have been nice ^_^.that and some necrophilia...maybe a little bit more gore...but i soppose the former would have been a little weird to submit to a contest. *glomps* I envy you so much! you're so talented!!

lol i quite like this story!
dno if it's meant to make me laugh but it did at certain points. e.g : he’ll gouge your eyes out with his tongue

lol interesting descrip =p

i finished ur story all the way to the end, sumfing i usually find dificult to do, so in my opinion it was a good story =]
well done :)

Alrighty... Interesting take on the "not-crazy" principle. I think you had good idea and lost it somewhere in the writing of this story. The unending carnage loses its horrific power; after the first paragraph or so, after at least six people have been disembowled already, it got boring. I understand the necessity of packing in as much action as you can for a short story, but this was excessive. Don't mistake me - I enjoy horror as much as anyone, but my policy is this: what is unseen is more frightening than what is blatantly in your face. Think about it: when you watch a horror movie, once you see the killer or the monster - whichever it may be - you don't have to cover your eyes anymore. It's when you're waiting for something to jump out at you that you feel afraid.

On the positive side, there were no typographical errors that I detected, and your sentences were very concise. I don't have any mental images of the main character, however, so I can't really get a sense of him. Once again, you're limited as to your descriptions, but I think this could use a little more work, and then it could be really creepy.

Keep writing!

If I was a judge I would disreguard this story. There are many things that could be done. The explanations are vivd, but there really is no line or anything that brings it all together. The ending isn't an ending at all. Also, when you enter a contest, many want to see a good writing style and would disreguard this simply for the amount of gore. This would not be allowed to ever be published. America is too simple and restrictive for that. In the end it was alright compasitionally, but needs a lot more work.