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| notwithoutyou 2008-05-03 ch 3,  | abuseWoopsie! You started again? Anyway. Back to my point. UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! ;] |
| firelily003 2008-04-17 ch 3, | abusekonichiwa 'Tis I again my friend As I cant review twice on one chapter I would like to say update Hate at First Sight soon! lol :P (I like those smileys now) yours most truly (sense?) v |
| -Ultra Glacial Rose- 2008-04-13 ch 2, | abuseI adore this story! It's quite fascinating. |
| TuneOut 2008-04-13 ch 3, | abuseThis story is moving along pretty fast and it does not seem like it's that realistic. The interactions between Autumn and Misty do not seem genuine. I think it would take a longer time for a conflict like theirs to resolve. Also, I would be careful. After reading the two chapters, I think Autumn has the chance to be a Mary Sue . In the story you portray her to be down to earth, friendly, supportive of her mom, "extremely pretty", etc. who is adored by all. I'd keep a close eye. |
| Singingperson 2007-08-27 ch 3, | abuseI really love this story. It's really well-written. Can you updates soon? Suspense is killing me. |
| Pieces of the sun 2007-07-22 ch 3, | abuseAww! I love Danny. Sounds adorkable. Misty is very feisty, but I do feel sorry for her. does she get a boyfriend? Update soon! |
| Sima 2007-07-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseIMAN! you updated your story without me checking it i thought u said u wouldnt? i thought i was ur BETA? *boo hoo* *sob sob* :'( |
| Klianie Janiko 2007-07-10 ch 3, | abuseThere seems to be no build up on Autumn and Danny but I definitely think that's unrealistically fast. Besides, didn't he have a past with Misty? Anyway, this chapter wasn't as witty as the first 2 that caught my attention. |
| goodbyemylover 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abusethis is a cool story, and i definitely wish all the hot boys went to my school! haha. i can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the great work! |
| urjellingcauseimevil 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abuseWOOT! i woot on two behalfs. 1. WOOT x100 U UPDATED!!.2. WOOT DANNY IS A FUNNY HOTTIE!.please let Adain see them making out. please. Peace.Love.Update.Kira |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abuseWoah shocker there! UPDATE! |
| Onia Black 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abusei live in new york, and um, well there's absolutely NO time difference between new york and conneticut. we even get the same radio stations o.O |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-07-09 ch 2, | abusegreat story...I like it...I like Autumn, Dex and Taylor..I hate Victoria... she is a **...I cant wait to see what happens next... hope you update soon |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-08 ch 2, | abuseHAHA! This is realy funny, I like it! UPDATE! |
| CK Shorty 2007-07-08 ch 2, | abuseThe thing that threw me off was how Misty suddenly jumped to conclusions and went and called Autumn stuck up and everything. At least try to get to know someone before saying things about them. That was really rude on her part, and right now, I don't think I really like her. Another thing is that you made her have purple hair/red and have piercings, a stereotypical appearance for people that are called 'emo'. The whole 'emo' thing is always throwing me off, because not all depressed people change their appearance and start cutting themselves over silly things. The guys are still a favorite though. |