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| The Love Demi Goddess 2007-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseI feel horrible critiquing someone's personal feelings, because Goddess knows those shouldn't be judged by someone else, but this poem could use some work. This poem just didn't "wow" me. I didn't see any difference between what you wrote and what millions of others write on this site everyday. As a poem, it was fine. But as a peice of art, it was unoriginal. write hard, write long, write until dawn, ~TLDG |