nice

wow that was raw. and really hard to follow.
but my god
that was intense

Your story's really intriguing. You have a good quality of being able to describe details -that's good. You're doing great with this story, post more soon!

this is a really good chapter...cought my attation...and there was some comendy...i like it im going to read up on it.

I like this story...finally someone who actually writes about hardcore reality. No frou frou, nice, perfect adolescent bullshit. Teens drink, do drugs and party. Those who outwardly disagree are indenial. I'm in love with this story. It doesn't that i only read the first chapter.

not too shabby. who is this hott blonde?!?! does this main character have any other issues than drugs. i like the direction your headed in but i think if you went into a little more detail about your character personalities and appearances i could paint a clearer picture of whats going on. other than that the scenes are drawn out decently well. i feel like im in rehab.

hmm, bit of a trail off at the end, but probably better then a few things I do. and don't worry about not being able to finish a story, especially if it's a chapter story. I can't even finish chapter stories.

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