"If not for the rain and the human-induced ambience, Ishigi would have heard the wind’s breath fall close to being Soushi;s voice whispering a calming “Daijoubu” or “I’m always here.”"

my favourite line.

you have a few run-ons in this chapter but they're not distracting. in fact my favourite line was somewhat of a run-on. ^^

great chapter. the characters in this story feel so real. and you end each chapter so well, too. must read more! update soon ^^

poor Ishigi! that really sucks.

this chapter was wonderful! your writing style is quite good. unlike anything I've read before. I realy liked how you portrayed Ishigi remember the Ohori Park. and then "His smile..." I got chills, lol.

keep up the great work!

your dialogs are wonderful! the character's emotion as they speak to one another blew me away! great work. I like this story so far ^^

That's an interesting thought. I've never really thought much about it. this is an interesting story. it doesn't much seem like one though. it seems more like a collection of connected thoughts.

nice prolouge. short but sweet(or sour... lol... sorry bad pun, I know).