My God, you're better at this genetic inheritance thing than my Bio teacher's explanations! xD

wow this is really interesting. the amount of detail is reall great too.

Good story. Obviously you have put a lot of effort into details. Good luck with it. It's very interesting.
~* Twilight Fanasty *~

hihi. this is an interesting concept. i like stories that look like they have had a lot of thought and effort put into them. i like the prologue, although you mentioned that the story is mostly about jared radetsky. but i like how you bothered to provide an insight on what life was like prior to this new order or whatever that jared is supposed to live in. can't wait until you update because i am intriged!