Thanks for reviewing! I like your work- it's quite cute. And thanks for the comments, I actually adjusted the work. The weird thing is that my updated story doesn't seem to appear on fictionpress..does it take a couple of days in order for the site to work? But anyway, I'm writing a bit every day.

My first thoughts were...abductor!...she's giving him away...then I was like she gave him some sort of shot!...thehn I was like "oh."
But that was so funny!

aww very cute. reminds me of my little brother (he's six) cept he only wails and freaks out if my mom attempts to cut his hair. He's fine if we take him to someone xP

--Alex

wow! i though colin was being kidnapped or something! but i like this lots...i personally don't remember my first hair cut but it was probably just like this =)

great write!

Hahahaha. I honestly thought the kid had been kidnapped when I started reading this. ...Then I thought maybe he was going to the doctor's. Then I thought he was getting kidnapped again.
...But he went to the barber's.
Heh. Close enough.

This is a very sweet story, it seems quite realistic. Your writing style is sophisticated and clear, I like reading your stuff.