Again, very poignant - and I know that feeling!

Oh my goodness. this is so incredible! You've got the words, the thoughts, all of it, down pat. Incredible.

aw, lost feelings [

Nice idea with a little touch of fluff ;)

I think phone calls are always like this. People know it too, they just don't admit it.

Aw. This was really cute. Great job.

that was so sad but very good and true for me at least [

i loved this, mostly because i am just getting over a break up and reading this, it felt like i was reading my own conversations. i really like the contrast between what they say and what they think, it rings so true. great piece... it feels so authentic.

and thanks for the comment on the first chapter of where spacemen go to die. encouragement goes a long way with me :)