I can't remember if I reviewed this one or not... but the point is that I really love it. Eternity does sound nice with someone you love, especially if things always stay the same-- an idealistic view of the world. I love how you use the phrase 'one day' in the second stanza. It's beautiful. And the last stanza is absolutely gorgeous. I love the sentiment of it, sharing this "imperfect little tune with you, only you, always."

I like this, the last stanza is one that really got me. I wish for someone to share all that with as well, to not have a 'one day'.

Keep it up.

interesting. not sure i fully understand it, but i love the sound and style of it. nice.

-PQ

yes, eternity does sound ever so lovely.

...i can't give comments.
i don't know how to, uh, how to 'see' in right way.
in the way you thought was a RIGHT way.