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Reviews For: What Would Have Been Your Seventeenth

002fox
2007-11-19
ch 1,
Such a beautiful sad poem...
You captured the emotions so well its a miracle i'm not trembling. yet..
Very well done sad, bitter, reminscent (sp?), and happy too!
Great job!
(Alas i lost a friend too.)
PoisonedRazorBlades
2007-06-03
ch 1,
This is so sweet and very sad... I love how you made this up. And I'm sorry for your loss (I know this sounds stupid.. But I am)
Reaper
2007-04-22
ch 1,
Nice...very nice. Written very well. Then again, I'm not a poem guy, so everyones is better than mine. Sorry for the loss, I know what it's like to lose a friend.

~Reaper
Cinera
2007-04-18
ch 1,
I'm an honest person, so I won't tell you that the poem was good. In my opinion, it wasn't that great. don't worry, I can't write poetry either. But what you were trying to say was there. It was understood. And that's really what matters.
Stale.Cracker
2007-03-11
ch 1,
I'm so sorry...that's awful...this was a beautiful poem. I'm sure that he misses you just as much as you miss him.
EMO.guys.AIN'T.got.SHXT.on....
2007-03-10
ch 1,
[I'm sorry . . . ]
A really sweet dedicating poem. I feel the sadness and earnest feeling inquiring the student who knew him. I can feel all the emotions. . .
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