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| 002fox 2007-11-19 ch 1, | Such a beautiful sad poem... You captured the emotions so well its a miracle i'm not trembling. yet.. Very well done sad, bitter, reminscent (sp?), and happy too! Great job! (Alas i lost a friend too.) |
| PoisonedRazorBlades 2007-06-03 ch 1, | This is so sweet and very sad... I love how you made this up. And I'm sorry for your loss (I know this sounds stupid.. But I am) |
| Reaper 2007-04-22 ch 1, | Nice...very nice. Written very well. Then again, I'm not a poem guy, so everyones is better than mine. Sorry for the loss, I know what it's like to lose a friend. ~Reaper |
| Cinera 2007-04-18 ch 1, | I'm an honest person, so I won't tell you that the poem was good. In my opinion, it wasn't that great. don't worry, I can't write poetry either. But what you were trying to say was there. It was understood. And that's really what matters. |
| Stale.Cracker 2007-03-11 ch 1, | I'm so sorry...that's awful...this was a beautiful poem. I'm sure that he misses you just as much as you miss him. |
| EMO.guys.AIN'T.got.SHXT.on.... 2007-03-10 ch 1, | [I'm sorry . . . ] A really sweet dedicating poem. I feel the sadness and earnest feeling inquiring the student who knew him. I can feel all the emotions. . . |