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| Delicacy of the Mind 2007-07-22 ch 5,  | abuselol, i love it! "school was worse" too true :P update soon! |
| JennieMR 2007-03-12 ch 2, | abuse. A silver photo frame containing a bright and cheerful photograph – the woman in the middle was beaming happily, and looked completely at home in the beautiful woods surrounding her. I touched the photo carefully, remembering back to the time when it had been taken. “Mum… please let me go home…” WAH! That's sad. :-( Ok, since his mom - er... sorry... MUM...lol is dead, that means you can get a double romance going here. Who can you conjure for Zack's dad?:P |
| JennieMR 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseCute start! I laughed when she called him jerk boy:P |
| xx Twilight 2007-03-11 ch 5, | abuseoh i like it a lot! more soon please? [= |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2007-03-11 ch 5, | abuseSorry I didn't get to review for the past few chappies. But they're all great. Please write some Brooke and Zack interaction! I can't wait. |
| fantasyrocker561 2007-03-11 ch 5, | abusei really like where this is going keep it up!! |
| BookWorm22202 2007-03-11 ch 5, | abuseLove it so far, keep it up! |
| upinstars 2007-03-11 ch 4, | abuseGreat story so far :) I like how you switch points of view with each chapter. I tried to do that once but I always had trouble writing the guy's point of view. lol I guess I can't think like a guy very well. |
| mierke 2007-03-11 ch 2, | abuseThis looks like it's going to be cute. The chapters are short, but I can hardly criticize because a few of my own chapters are pretty short too. Maybe it's because you ony have two chapters up right now so the plot hasn't really come out yet? I hope that's it and they will get longer :D Anyway, good job and I can't wait to read more! |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseHaha. This sounds good. The last sentence--does that mean she tripped when she walked away from him just now? Hilarious. Update! |
| xx Twilight 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abusehaha! nice story, i really like it [= there's more right? |
| fantasyrocker561 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abusesounds interesting keep it up=] |
| viki-violet 2007-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abusesounds great. keep up the good work |