Man, I forgot that I didn't read the end of this, and I'm even more surprised that I remembered what was going on. It's been a long time since I've read your works and I know I left a lot of short reviews in the past but I've decided to get better on leaving longer, more detailed ones because I kind of changed over the course of time.

I really like the ending of this story and how everyone seemed in high spirits. It was a comforting feeling, and yet it was sad to see such a great story coming to a close.

I think this story was spectacular and I don't say that about hardly anyone's works anymore. You've always been a very talented individual and I love your works.

I think I'll go and read another one of your stories. I wish you well in all that you do, definitely look for more reviews from me.

good story can't wait for the next book

Oh, I like Fay. I wonder what her secret power is...Well, I didn't expect Stella to be evil until she offered to take care of Fay. Thank God Ren and Cyrus came back in time.

I actually thought Fay would cause a tantrum and unleash her powers, but that didn't happen (yet?). Now I am curious about when the Luna twins are gonna show up again.

By the way, I really liked the way you brought in the morality issues concerning killing. That last bit with Ren hugging Cyrus after killing Stella was one of the most bitter-sweet moments I have read (see? Angst isn't so bad ^^, lol). I think for now Ren is getting much more characterization than Cyrus, but that might change.

:D

That smiley face is what my face looks like right now. I just wanted to say thank you for writing this story, and I can't wait for the next installment.

See you soon,

~carm~

Man, this is definitely getting good! But I can tell there will be more to this. I really like the Luna twins! They are so cool!

Oh, and I'll be updating To Wish Upon The Sea today, so be sure to look for a new chapter.

I'm so sorry that I didn't review sooner. Been away.

A very interesting set of chapters. Things are wrapping up and coming to an end, I see. But there's going to be more, right?

Hope to read more soon!

~carm~

WOW! JUST WOW! This definitely is one of my favourite chapters! The Luna Twins are awesome! Damn, who would have thought?

Well, the battle was excellently done; nice pace and fluidity, description melded in perfectly with the entire tone and tempo, and of course, a lot of violence, lol. I loved it. This truly was one of your best action scenes and I hope you have got more coming!

Not only the action was good, but the entire foreboding and morbid tone of this chapter (which was appropiately placed in a forest) was excellent. I got a hint of the Luna twins ending up as Cyrus and Ren's enemies when they talked before the fight. I also have the feeling the vibes I am getting from Seren...does she like Ren more than in a friendly way, or is itjust my hopeful shoujo-ai radar that is fooling me into believing that ^^ ? Her last words kind of gave me that feeling.I also think they are bounty-hunting for a good reason; they mentioned something about "us three" (possibly a family member, or just their boss or something...). Maybe they are involved with Krie, and she was the one Seren mentioned at the end. God, I am speculating too much!

Anyway, you desrve an A+ for this chapter!

No! He killed Molly's Uncle!

Wow, this was an awesome chapter! The last bit had me reading furiously until I realised, "Oops! The chapter is finished!" I think compared to Seraphim Crusade, the descriptions in this story sometimes feel a little less embellished, which can be a good thing, but not always. I should also mention that the word, "isle", means island. You probably meant "aisle", unless the American spelling is "isle". I don't know.

And some loli-action I see! Those old geezers drooling at poor little Ren! Cyrus should be the one drooling at her! Lol. I wonder if Malcom is right and Aymel truly is evil (or she is not and inadvertently is feeding on Ren's life force or something of the sort...), or if the whole thing will lead to a big misunderstanding and a nice action-filled confrontation! Or maybe that's just me hoping for some more Malcom awesomeness...lol.

I am making such slow progresses with this story, am I not? ^^ lol.

Anyway, the addition of new characters has left me baffled. I wonder if they are going to be of great significance. Hopefully, not because we have got enough children in this story! ^^ lol

I must confess, in the first chapter I thought Cyrus and Ren were twins (or relatives, must be another fantasy story I have been reading). I don't know why I ended up thinking that (of course, I was proved wrong quickly), but when Ren gave off this bashfullness vibe in the first chapter (at the tavern), I was really freaked out. Lol.

I want to know what happens next! Why did Malcom lead Cyrus to that church and what significance does it have to the over all plot? And Ren and Cyrus...I wonder if he reciprocates her feelings. I am still looking forward to Peregrine's awakening as well.

Good chapter. Now I need continue reading SP2 'til the end!

I can't believe there are only two chapters left. But I guess everything is slowing down to close. T_T I'll be sad when this ends. I plan on updating To Wish Upon The Sea sometime this week, so look out for a new chapter.

A short, but well written chapter. I'm going to add this to my favorites list. It's such a wonderful piece.

This story makes me inexplicably happy. I think it's the way you blend detail with simple narration. It's just...so nice :) So, fantastic chapter, and update soon!

Happy Friday the 13th,

~carm~

Wow...That was good. I was involved in this chapter. You definitely held my attention. I'll definitely be back next chapter.

This was an extraordinary chapter. I was so absorbed that I forgot I had an appointment. Really! I ended up being 5 minutes late, but it was worth it since I got to finish reading this :)

Can't wait for more!

~carm~

Awesome chapter. I really like that priest, Malcom, but he does seem a little... like a misfit to this high fantasy story. On the other hand, Krie is our typical, feisty battle vixen with a temper, lol ^^.

I think the only problem I had with this chapter lies in the action scenes. They were quite good and fluid, but I really, really don't like it when you say,

"A blue aura formed around the blade." The word aura just makes me...shudder. Sorry, it's probably just me. I might end up using it as well one day! But, still I think you could have said,

"Into his blade came the ferocity of his strength, shimmering like a streak of blue through the darkness of midnight."

Something along that line anyway. Aura sounds so blunt as to being a little inappropiate almost.

I wonder where this story is going...I am struggling to form the proper links. For now, the plot seems to have a linear direction; attack the Gaiden prison and free the villagers, but what about Aymel? And the other characters' past? And the zombies? I am sure you will find a way of linking them together soon enough ^^.

By the way, I am not sure if Vince was really referring to Ren here:

“She looked like a woman on the outside …”

But, maybe it's just me secretly hoping for a bishounen to fill the story with glamour and glitz! LOL!