:'(
Angel que no comprendio aquel sentimiento; aquella bella emocion; slo puede ser el recuerdo..
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el recuerdo de que algo termino
u_u
no se porque lo escribo; pero T-T me hizo llorar
nos vemos

¡Ay! Me duele la cabeza despues de leer tu poema, pero estoy entenido todo. (Lo siento, if I said that wrong, I'm trying to practice as much as I can.)

Again, this was an extremely beautiful poem. It was a pleasure to read and I loved it, especially the title. It's hard for me to put into words (in English OR Spanish ^_^) how well you write and how much I love the way you phrase things.

"Tonto es mi corazón"--That had to be one of my favoritre parts. It was simple and to the point, but that made it no less emotional than the rest of the poem.

I do have one question, though. Why did you put the first letters of some of the last lines in bold? I can't tell what purpose it serves, though I'm sure you did it for a reason.

Well, I understood nearly all of the poem, and what I didn't I looked up, but I just can't find what 'llevándote' or 'presurosas' mean. Can you tell me?