In the beginning, I was worried that you were fishing for words that rhymed, with no sustiance, and I know that's not your style. The first two paragraphs worried me. I read on though, I could never loose convince in your craft that quickly, and you restored my faith in the following verses.

I should have known...there was just a build up to something greater...you must have intended to not give all the goods right away...you coy little minx!

great. very unique style, narritve-y. but awesome all the same. my favourite line:


My love was an open book, a fairy tale hand-crafted.

I hope one day you'll think to read. That it haunts you ever after.


great play of words. adding it to my faves ;)