geez, your a techno dude(ette) arent you? (lol!) well, realy good! i just have to keep up with all those names, i asked for it!

So hess is gunna spy on them, andtell the leader guy that there planning a coupe... hm

nice. really good! keep going!

wow. now this is a story! this is really good, and if you play your cards right, you could get this published!

now thats what im talking about! This is very good! Keep it up!

So theres gunna be another coupe eh? well hurry up and update it.

kool. go technoledgy! i love palmcomps!

didnt you say it was 5 or 6 days last chapter? and didnt you say there were only about 10 members on the forum? I dont know. This is pretty good.. but how many chapters are you gunna have if 3 days out of 600 = 11 chapters?

do you HAVE to end every chapter like that?! anyway, again, i really like your story, but maybe you could add some of the people who are bombing the place, you know, their perspective. you don't have to write every day those guys spend in those bunkers, just the important days. so far, so good!

crap! you mean you ended right there? AAH! well, it is very good, so please update!

This is intriguing! I'd like to read more later.

wow, its really good. maybe you could write whats happening out there, in the world, outside the bunkers.

wow, id hate to be in there! I love the story!

You write these chapters DAMN fast.. i just read last chapter a few hours ago! and the two chapters before that yesterday!

I dont see why they dont play cards over the food packets. those are the only things worth anything.