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Twist130 2007-03-12 . chapter 1
Nice poem, I liked this one. It seems sort of like it's based on some real life experience, but that could just be randomness talking. (Is randomnosity a word? Because it would be soo cool if it were...)

Anyway, I really liked this one... only, the second line of the last stanza sounds like it should have another beat... 'Look back at the years you missed', perhaps?
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