Wow... another great poem! One thing - 'writhe in my shadow' - kinda sticks out - by that line, do you mean the subject to be the person being spoken to? Cos the rest of the lines around it follow from 'I want... to... taste, watch, feel, etc.', and it kinda threw me a little as to who you were talking about.

But then! I could just be stoned and have taken it the wrong way. Nonetheless, a really really really good poem. SuPERB.

~Ally B.

morbid. i adore it :)

This is hot. Very sensual and dark. It reminds me of something I wrote long ago. I adore...as always.