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| il-mio-libro 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuse(im on lj) i got the quote too! yay for being well-read! it's great to see this finished because i've seen bits of it over the past few months in your sn =P "a hopeless end to a dear and dead exchange" yay x |
| teh meh 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseundressing to impress as his eyes scar her skin fave line! look i'm reviewing! and i assume then you agree that we should use more quotes... iz x |
| Christybell 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI IS REVIEWING "they’re dancing with contrived desire and sweating sin" This is fabulous, like always... you just seem to get better and better ^-^ and oh, I noticed the 1984 quote! Go me! |
| forty-two dreams 2007-03-11 ch 1,  | abuseExquisite as always, Iris. Keep being you, pretty please? |
| beatrice is hot 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat poetry. Really beautiful. I'm usually a jerk in reviews, but this really was great. Best line: "(fiction replaces trust)". Criticism: If I'd written it, I wouldn't have written lines 5-7. But- I didn't write it. Good job. |
| lordelfy 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abusewow, freakin awesome. Seems like you have a big vocab; something i dont have! To me, this poem was very thought out and flowed well, great job! |