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| Carmel March 2007-06-20 ch 13,  | abuseThese poems are wonderful. You manage to paint a picture with your words. I really liked the Summer Day and Rain one. Good job on this. Keep it up, you're amazing :D ~carm~ |
| Tikklz 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI have no idea what to think of this. I like the "drum roll please" parts. But I was confused whether it was metaphoric that he kills girls or literal. maybe try to clear that up. |
| perpetual questions 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is my review for Drum Roll Please: I really like it, especially the title line. The last two lines caught me by surprise... I wasn't expecting any guns and I don't really understand it. But in all likelyhood that's just me not being bright or being ignorant :D Great work, I'll review some more of your stuff later! ~Hazellin |
| Tytherpol 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI like you. You really shouldn't be so shy about showing people your writing. I used to quiver at the thought of it, but now that I'm okay with people seeing mine, it has made me a more concious writer. You write well. (oh and I was so glad that I qualified to paste all of your things on my lookup, though I probably won't. xD) Keep writing girl. ~Sara. |
| simply meg 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. The repeating "Drum roll please" was inspiring. Nice work. Write On! (And thank you for your review) |