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| MidnightShadow07 2008-07-06 ch 3, | abuseI hope you can update soon!! ~MS07 |
| Fantasyland 2007-05-26 ch 3, | abuseThis was fantastic reading! Really took me into the Old West...keep it up! |
| Cesalie Chase 2007-05-22 ch 2, | abuseWow. This is intense. Completely different from your random stories! (Though I could tell already, by reading them, that you're a very talented writer.) Honestly, I've never read any Westerns before, but yours has definitely grabbed my attention! All of your descriptions are so subtle, creating vivid mental pictures without me even realizing that I am reading description. (Haha - did that make sense?) I just love how you work all those details into the story - it flows together really nicely. And the plot is absolutely gripping! Already, in the first chapter, the situation is so complex... Their sister's getting married to the son of the man who - wow. You've got quite a creative mind! I'm really impressed. With all your ideas and your talent, and with God on your side, you're bound to go far. I have to run, but I'll be back to read the next chapter (later today, hopefully). Till next time, keep that pen moving, and God bless! :) ~Cesalie |
| ArmedDoomMuffins 2007-04-07 ch 3, | abusePlease do continue, this is lovely |
| Acton Bell 2007-03-23 ch 3, | abuseBut what happens next?! I really want to know. :) Very good so far. When's the rest coming? |