Some typos in this one, like wierd instead of weird and steriotype instead of stereotype. I'd like to see where it's going though ^^ Like it so far.

And here you switched from Romy to Remy I believe

Hmm, in the first few chapters, she lives in Sacramento and now she said she hated San Fransisco? Aren't you confusing two cities now? :p

Ive fallen inlove w. your fic! i read the sequel and everything but i definitely like this one more and the lemon scene was so well written!

I can't wait to read the sequel. Jay and Chase should be together.

When I read your first chapter, I thought your story was okay. Second chapter was alright too, but as it went on, I found it really hard to read. I don't intend to bash on your story, or be mean or anything, but it seemed too "Quizilla"-like. How Jacey is always talking to herself, everything always works out so that Jacey gets the boy (Tyler) right away.
I kept reading though, and when Remy and Kegan came in, it got really hard to read. Mainly because Jacey seemed really off. Her personality didn't seem to fit her character. She was TOO outspoken, always clinging on guys. (i.e., she was sleeping with Kegan, calling him Pookie, etc.) It just doesn't flow, like when she says she doesn't have any experience with boys. Because that wasn't true at all.
I'm not saying that your story sucks or anything, but it's probably that it's not my taste. It was a bit too unrealistic. And I'm not saying I could do a better job. Because honestly, I don't think I could. I think it's just me, because it seems that plenty of other people love your story. But as for me, I couldn't get past chapter 10.

damn he is gay..
well actuli its better that he is.

I must admit I actually guessed that.. and he likes her right?
but as for the chase thing.. yeh unguessable... yeh ...

I bit my lip. "How many people have you guys killed?"

Kegan snorted. "Eleven, all together."

was that just a major typo ans just supposed to be Tommy?

By the way, this story is good!

i absolutely loved this story, you have no idea how much. i can't wait to start reading the sequal, i'm just sorry i didn't find it sooner...

haha this story is great i cant wait to get started on the sequel once i finish this one up!

=D

OMIGOD I LOVE MIKA! AHH!!

Anyway.. i just started reading your stary and it's great so far. And then I got to this chapter and freaked out cuz you have Mika in it. Did you know they're coming to Minnesota pretty soon? (that's where I live) lol. Anyway. I'm going to finish reading your story.

stareyed14

aww yay love your storyy... and depressing ending =(

GASP!

Gay guys are fun.