this was the cutest thing ever! if only real guys were that nice. and i think you did an amazing job on everything so far. keep up the great work!

no offense, but that was barely considered a sex scene. the first part of the scene itself wasnt even a sex scene because there was no sex. the only sex scene-ish part is like the very last sentence.

CHASE! he's totally hot.

er..you spelled it 'discusted' i think you mean 'disGusted' ? lol yea

...? san fransico? i thought it was sacramento.

yay chocochip cookie! even yayer for tequial! and yayest for chase!

no! why would anyone want to steal my chase? *tear* im still hoping for a new character to take her breath away and leave chase to me, but hopes are just dreams...

jacey can have the new not introduced yet character, cuz tylers a jerk and ive already called chase and kegan is just too sweet for any type of relationship with her.

this chapter has left me speechless! its such an unexpected turn and its amzing! i wish chase were real, hed definatly be my drug of choice forever, mafia and all.

wow i love your story! i cant wait to see who jacey picks and what happens next! simply amazing!

Great story!

I really enjoyed the read. It has more twists and turns than...well than almost anything I've ever read.

Keep up the entertainment...I'll be here to read it! )

hey!i loved ur story.i ALMOST cry in the last work.i hope u make the sequel... D please?hey so whose the person in the white camero with tinted windows?i hope chase shows up soon...please make the sequel!

haha

can you say...complicated?

that was a quick wrap up.

If you didn't end it sooner it will surely drag out. Are you re-writing this?

Nevertheless, yay you finished a story! Good job, it's not easy, seeing that I can never get past writing the first chapter.

hehehe

good.

mwah!

As weird as the story turned out (a good weird, by the way) . . . I liked the ending. Confusing, yet straight to the point . . . Loved it

Oh gosh! Please tell me that there will be a sequel! Please!

Cyndi

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Cyndi