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| Boogyoogy 2007-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseI got so excited when i saw that the you spelled magic magic not magick I see SO many stories using magick and it bothers me lol |
| Among-the-Vampires 2007-04-30 ch 3, | abuseand let his wings to their job-shouldn't it be-and let his wings do their job?? and be locked him out of the building.-shouldn't it be-and be locked out of the building?? Mckain kinda reminds me of House and Calaway kinda reminds me of Willson. But what i have read of your story i like. No go write and up date the damn thing...and if u don't i will bug you until you do...well im off. take luck. |
| Among-the-Vampires 2007-04-30 ch 2, | abusehey look another review from me. lol. sorry had to say it. and found a place among humansBut not before agreeing to a...should it be-and found a place among humans.But not before agreeing to a... He avoided Calaway at lunch, and when the day ended, drove home shouldn't it be - He avoided Calaway at lunch, and when the day ended, he drove home? |
| Among-the-Vampires 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseYo...so i'm finally reading your story... “And my second job is stripper.” shouldn't that be “And my second job is being a stripper.”? or “And my second job is a stripper.”? shouldn't it be one of those two?? but yeah im gonna go read the next chapter. |
| InuNekoKitsune21 2007-03-23 ch 3, | abuseWell, the random capture wasn't expected, of course it wouldn't be random if it was expected, now would it? It was a fantastic chapter! ^_^ Update soon! |
| InuNekoKitsune 2007-03-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell, he saw that one coming. Haha Calaway amuses me. McKain's entertaining too, well he sorta has to be..seeing as he's the main character... Update soon. If not, I might bug you at school to update.. ^_^ |
| InuNekoKitsune 2007-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, it was kick ass. ^_^ I don't know why you kept on calling it crap... when it's not. At all. |
| Lyke Boo 2007-03-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseto lazy to log in, but I like it like i liked that last one |
| Snow Wolf Alpha 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, can't wait to see how this develops. Please Update Soon. |
| f u c k - me.xx 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseReviews are nice but people writing you very good replies is better. It like it though it's only the first chappie. I'm hooked. XD Write more like ASAP! Think of all the happy faces |