Wow, that is just REALLY beautiful. No joke, I love it

Aww that is really sweet!
Did you show it to the person it's about? If you didn't I think you should, it's soo sweet and it's just brilliant!

i love it!! i have the same thoughts most days about a friend.

Keep writing!

~Katie

I don't usually read poems, but I got this 'new story' alert in my email account, since you're on my author alerts for "I Only Have Eyes For You," I decided to read this. Plus, for some reason, your summary got my attention. But I really liked it. It's the first poem I've read in ages that I wanted to add to my favorites list.

Now, to show or not to show; that is the question. If you and him are already such good friends, I think you should. Two things could happen: He either likes you back or he doesn't. If he does, it's obvious things will work out. If he doesn't, things will be alright, anyways, because he's a good friend of yours, and the poem to me shows how comfortable you are with him. People don't let people get comfortable like that, with hugs and pecks on the cheeks, and two straws in a giant coke cup, unless they want to. He wants to, or so it seems to me. So if you're as good friends as I think you are, nothing bad can come out of showing this poem to him. It's a sweet way to say "I like you, won't you be my Valentine?" in April. Haha. Wow I'm not sure that made sense. But just so you know, I've had guys come to me, who are my friends, and ask me out or tell me they like me as more than a friend, and I tell them 'no' or 'oh, well, I see you as just a friend,' and it does get awkward for a very little while, but it gets better.

Wow, I hope that helps.

--Greyhound.

Wow! I seriously love this and you should def. show it!

I'm going to continue on the same track as "Tizbd" had. I'm not saying he/she is WRONG, per se, I just want to add my own advice, from personal experience. Think about yourself, and think about him. How do you think he'll react? Does he feel the same way? Or not? Do what you feel, not what you think. Should he say he feels the same way, then you're most certainly better off for telling him rather than hiding it. If not, well, that's where things can get complicated. I had liked this one friend of mine for a few months. I finally managed to tell her how I felt, but she didn't return the feelings. After that, things were very awkward for quite a while. However, it all worked out, and we still remained friends. I hate to sound cliché, but I can only think of one piece of advice for you: Follow your heart.

~JQ

ah, sweet :)

nice work.

~Hazellin

Wow!! I liked the sentiment in it very much! It's very very nice, and I know the feeling, sadly I can't advise you to show him, or not. Unless you really want to and are ready to accept the consequences.

(If you like him, and don't want to lose him, cause you suspect he doesn't feel the same, don't show it to him.)

love. and definately show it to him. :]