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Reviews For: Perfection

blackrose214 2007-07-27 ch 1,	abusewow. that was sad. depressing. (like you already stated so nicely.) And it was - no is - really GOOD. Great actually. could be made into a song. or a story (but I guess there are already a lot of stories that hit close to home regarding this topic.) Btw, something I forgot about the latest chapter of "Breaking the mirror" (#22): I would prefer if you kept Jayden`s POV. But if you think it`ll benefit your writing progress, the story or aything else important majorly, I`m okay with a switch as well. It`s ony, it would be weird to not know what Jayden is thinking while everything happens. But maybe you could like, always switch between his POV and for example Seaton`s? The directly involved and the watching and waiting one? That`d probably be best... But it`s up to you, really. And sorry for writing that here, but sadly you can`t change your reviews on this site. sigh Anyway, update soon! And the poem really is great. ^^
Meri 2007-05-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseit's so sad!, and i gotta go hug my mommy and daddy for not being like that now...
chameleonduality 2007-04-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseIf I had to pick a favourite bit: 'I’ve been anything and everything you’ve wanted me to be, But still I’m less then perfect and that’s all you seem to see. One day I’ll be tired and stop living up to your dreams, I’ll grow weary of your hatred and you multiple self-esteems. I’ll find someone who likes the way I walk and talk and smile, Who thinks I’m perfect the way I am and who finds my life worthwhile.' I loved that bit. I can sympathise. Sometimes expectations can just overwhelm you to the point of suffocation. And there never seems to be anyone who can really understand, or at least just let you be YOU, once and for all. Honest, exposed, and with a hopeful ending. It's difficult putting something that vulnerable up, so kudos to you. Peace.

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