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Duuude
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseoh. I like. I definitely like. I can't believe you're younger than me, not significantly, but you're still younger! And you're so good at writing. This poem's really nice. It really is true, we always want what we don't have. >__>
EllYouSeeWhy
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abusewow I love it :o

And telling someone to change their ways

Is useless is they don’t have a choice.

^
like that bit (:
souzen
2007-12-21
ch 1,
abuseIt really does makes sense. I like the way you compared things and I think it's really deep. :D
Meri
2007-05-06
ch 1, anon.
abusewell i hardly read poetry but i really liked this, it is pretty true as depressing as that is, now i gotta go read the rest of your stuff:p
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