It is so true. I love it! In a non perverted way but still, love is love.

=0 this is good!

would you mind very much if i showed it to people? What do i put as the author's name?

oh. I like. I definitely like. I can't believe you're younger than me, not significantly, but you're still younger! And you're so good at writing. This poem's really nice. It really is true, we always want what we don't have. >__>

wow I love it :o

And telling someone to change their ways

Is useless is they don’t have a choice.

^
like that bit (:

It really does makes sense. I like the way you compared things and I think it's really deep. :D

well i hardly read poetry but i really liked this, it is pretty true as depressing as that is, now i gotta go read the rest of your stuff:p