Well, that is certainly a lovely way to describe life. You know ho I describe it? "Blech." Your way is much better. "A daisy among roses..." that is so true and I think that's how just about every sane girl feels. That's how I feel anyway. And for your touching review: thanks.

I love this metaphor and the title is awesome... the ending is great too... well done

omgosh, this is awesome! imagery, the rythm.. I liked your alusion to Eden! the clearly bitter taste when you bite into this poem seems... wholesome?-like bitter, filling bread- it's just enough meat to make it a beautiful creation... that's so beautiful!(p.s.) thanks for the reveiw!

So morbid a poem of flowers... There's a very raw and apathetic twist once you've finished reading and you go back and look at the title.

That's kind of sad. Good job tho.

~Hazellin