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| Chaco 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abusei like your diction. but then, i always do. XD "trees seem to sprout flowers while shedding leaves"...so pretty. omg, there's a paradox! :D "thrice"...lol i never knew that was an actual word. ^^; uh, ok. i'll stop reviewing this poem now cuz i'm starting to analyze it like i would have to do in AP English =o= so~ ya. great and lovely poem!! ^^ |