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Chaco
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abusei like your diction. but then, i always do. XD

"trees seem to sprout flowers while shedding leaves"...so pretty. omg, there's a paradox! :D
"thrice"...lol i never knew that was an actual word. ^^;

uh, ok. i'll stop reviewing this poem now cuz i'm starting to analyze it like i would have to do in AP English =o=

so~ ya. great and lovely poem!! ^^
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