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A-wolf-called-Skya
2007-06-09
ch 1,
I like this one. I read the end more as a remark made "in skepticism" which i thought was nice. you probably didn't mean that way, but its what first came to my mind.
it seems to set the way for another poem telling of the little, common, married couple arguments to me xD
that would be interesting...hehe.

how have you been?

and... figured i should say...
finally posting the rewrite of DS as its being written. i've figured it out fully now. very happy with myself.
i'll take down the original soon. xD

good writing,

-Rachel.
C-Houston
2007-04-08
ch 1,
Your poetry is amazing...can I be your fairy tale lover?
Chaco
2007-03-18
ch 1,
ya, go fairy tale fantasies. :D
i almost laughed (almost cuz i'm not supposed to be "having fun" right now) when i read "starving witch hag." i don't know why. it just sounded kinda funny. o.o
i also liked how you put "happily ever after" in 3 lines. feels kinda...intense? O_o haha, i can't find the word. XD
you wrote a parody! O.O well, it's not THAT much of a parody. its at least half chacha-y. you didn't write like those ppl in my class that wrote a ballad (as a project!) that was like "Cinderella" in their own words >
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